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PostSubject: Riddle Poem   Tue May 13, 2008 11:53 pm

This week our English I class was assigned two poems to do for class.. they had specific guidlines and were title the Facade Poem and the Riddle Poem... well the point of this thread is.. well i made a riddle poem which is basically a riddle just plain and simple but slightly different..i shared it with a couple of friends at school and they said it was pretty hard.. but eh idk.. so well i wanted to know what u guys thought of it here ya go..

P.S. i cant put the title because it gives the way the answer

I am in every desert,
But yet there is no desert in me,
For surely if there was I wouldn't be me.
I am what I am,
But if I wasn't what I was,
then I would surely be something.
You cannot touch me,
And yet I am all around you.
I laugh in the face of danger,
Cause danger cannot hurt me.
I cannot die,
And yet I cannot live.
If you look for me you will not find me
And yet in not finding me,
I will be found.
What am I?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 14, 2008 12:58 am

air/wind?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 14, 2008 2:54 am

OMG! You're Simba!
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 14, 2008 7:47 am

Prophet of Reality wrote:
This week our English I class was assigned two poems to do for class.. they had specific guidlines and were title the Facade Poem and the Riddle Poem... well the point of this thread is.. well i made a riddle poem which is basically a riddle just plain and simple but slightly different..i shared it with a couple of friends at school and they said it was pretty hard.. but eh idk.. so well i wanted to know what u guys thought of it here ya go..

P.S. i cant put the title because it gives the way the answer

I am in every desert,
But yet there is no desert in me,
For surely if there was I wouldn't be me.
I am what I am,
But if I wasn't what I was,
then I would surely be something.
You cannot touch me,
And yet I am all around you.
I laugh in the face of danger,
Cause danger cannot hurt me.
I cannot die,
And yet I cannot live.
If you look for me you will not find me
And yet in not finding me,
I will be found.
What am I?

aHA!
You're Space.

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 14, 2008 9:45 pm

lol aft u should be ashamed of urself.. lol that is the most common answer i have gotten.. and it does go abit.. but thats not it.. and no chicken its not Simba.. and sry avid its not space either lol
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 14, 2008 11:51 pm

haha i didn't think it was air just putting in a random guess. what is it then?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 15, 2008 7:48 am

Um...Time?
Love?

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 15, 2008 7:50 am

I maintain that you are Simba. Smile Either that or Nala.
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 15, 2008 12:38 pm

I want to say heat, but it's possible to see heat waves...
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 15, 2008 2:40 pm

Prophet of Reality wrote:
This week our English I class was assigned two poems to do for class.. they had specific guidlines and were title the Facade Poem and the Riddle Poem... well the point of this thread is.. well i made a riddle poem which is basically a riddle just plain and simple but slightly different..i shared it with a couple of friends at school and they said it was pretty hard.. but eh idk.. so well i wanted to know what u guys thought of it here ya go..

P.S. i cant put the title because it gives the way the answer

I am in every desert,
But yet there is no desert in me,
For surely if there was I wouldn't be me.
I am what I am,
But if I wasn't what I was,
then I would surely be something.
You cannot touch me,
And yet I am all around you.
I laugh in the face of danger,
Cause danger cannot hurt me.
I cannot die,
And yet I cannot live.
If you look for me you will not find me
And yet in not finding me,
I will be found.
What am I?
um...death?

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 15, 2008 4:58 pm

no you can see death.

how about your mind! cause in that heat and stuff you can loose your mind and go CRAZY!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Fri May 16, 2008 9:46 am

water vapor?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Fri May 16, 2008 10:23 am

Quote :
no you can see death.
You can see people die, but you can't see death itself...

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Sun May 18, 2008 7:25 pm

"If you look for me you will not find me"

but if you look for death and you can find it.

i want to say a mirage, cause they appear in deserts, you can't touch it as its not real, but they are always all around you, you can't hurt a mirage as its not there, mirages don't die or live, if your looking for a mirage you won't find it cause you won't notice its fake but even if you don't look you'll find it without knowing. i don't know but thats probably my best guess.
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Mon May 19, 2008 7:51 am

I'd say ORD's guess is pretty solid.

If he's wrong, PoR, what is it?

EDIT: Yeah, ORD just has to be right. He fits in every way.

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Mon May 19, 2008 1:19 pm

I third ORDINATOR's hypothesis.
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Mon May 19, 2008 3:01 pm

ORD got it, totally.


IM BACK! i got C&C3 for my b-day, so i played that for like 3 weeks, srry for being gone, sum1 pm me on what i missed
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Mon May 19, 2008 7:02 pm

Hahaha, I got the smart man! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Tue May 20, 2008 8:40 am

I don't know if you missed anything of not. I'm always out of the loop, because I"m not on when you guys are. XP
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Tue May 20, 2008 10:43 pm

lol well ord gives a pretty good answer and backs it up for nicely.. but i am sry that its incorrect like all the rest.. i will give u a hint look closely at this it gives a big clue

"But if I wasn’t what I was,
then I would surely be something."

that line ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 21, 2008 2:38 am

Nothing?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 21, 2008 11:16 am

PoR, give us the answer, dude.

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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Wed May 21, 2008 1:43 pm

light? darkness?
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 22, 2008 9:33 am

gosh darn it!
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PostSubject: Re: Riddle Poem   Thu May 22, 2008 9:41 pm

i think Mirage fits better than the real answer actually will.

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