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PostSubject: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:28 pm

this is a completly random thing, i was looking up st...oops, cant say that, vehicles and i started to write this. I wrote it first, and just started to port it over into Word 2 minutes ago, so ill edit in the other stuff wen im done posting every where else.


The Assault

Written by: Ryknow69



Day 457,

13:07 oíhour,



The ships started to land, each ship deployed thousands of troops, each bred for a sole purpose of killing. On the other side of the field, large side-ways Hís landed; large vehicles hovered out, each held 100 droids, armed and prepared for battle.

Day 457,

14:10 oíhour,



The battle began, the AT-TEís lead the attack, followed up by AT-APís, which rained hell upon to opposing droids. Unchallenged vultures filled the air, firing down on the army. Spiders gunned down troopers, but being tall, they were prime targets for artillery. Trooper D15C2 moved behind a rock, blaster fire filled the air with a fuzzy heat. His once bright white, red, & black armor was now dull brown from the mud. He lifted his gun over the rock, then his head. Big, bulky droids marched forward, firing their wrist blasters at his brethren; he fired at one, at the legs then the head. The rest fired, some shot rockets, he knew there was little chance. But suddenly a huge explosion, ending up in a shower of mud, occurred. AT-RTís stomped through, behind them an AT-TE and two AT-OTís. Blaster fire quickly engulfed the other side of the rock. The vulture skies now started to fill with LAATís. LAAGís dropped more walkers around him, each stomped off, firing. He ran to one of the AT-OTís, climbing an emergency ladder. At the top he realized this one wasnít a transport, but a medical center. Wounded troopers lay about, medicals aiding them. The AT-TE continued to lay hell ahead.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:37 pm

I knew what the battle was between as soon as i read " large side-ways Hís" lol its still good i reckon. I don't know any of that AT stuff but yeah. This story is good for fans of starwars and lots of action.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:38 pm

its not the naboo battle, its 457 days into the clone wars
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:39 pm

yeah i knew that from the first line lol. well i didn't know the exact number of years from there it was but yeah. i love the look of the clone troopers.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:44 pm

its the 145th Marine Division, theres the Clone Army(Simple color coding), Clone Marines(Specialized armor, they are used on tougher missions, like the US marines), Clone Commandos(Specialized armor with shields, special interchangable guns, individual personalities, the chose of right or wrong, only about 100-200 in the entire universe), Clone Navy(Specialy bred for space conditions, plain armor) =D
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:47 pm

ah yeah i know about the commandos, is it the Army or the marines in the movies? cause i like the look of the ones in the movies.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:51 pm

the army is seen on geonosis, they have simple helmet and color changes, marines are in episode 3, with blue as the marine rifle men, rather than pure white
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu May 08, 2008 7:56 pm

so there isn't much of a difference in the armor appearance. ah well they all look cool anyway. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Fri May 09, 2008 7:16 am

oh, there is a huge difference, Marine BARC Speedmen Wear a helmet and armor designed to take heavy crashes at high velocity and aid in seeing while going so fast.

Army BARC Speedermen wear a streamlined helmet and armor for more speed, they both are diffrent
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Sat May 10, 2008 8:50 pm

ah ok.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:07 pm

i love star wars, but ive never been a fan of SW books *shrugs*
good writing technique, however. unique, imo.

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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu Jun 05, 2008 10:44 pm

i lost the pages i wrote on, must find


u like how i barely mentioned, or completly didn't mention, clones or full droid names, its put through the eyes of the troopers. It's there view of the war.
They MUST make a book after that idea/view =D


PS: i read any book about a game i like and/or play
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:07 pm

yeah you done it really well, you didn't say their exact names but we knew what you were on about.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:57 pm

ive read the Halo novels and the Mass Effect novel. All were amazing, of course.

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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Sat Jun 07, 2008 11:14 am

ooooohhhhhhh, mass efect novels!? WHERE!? i never got to play game, but it got 2nd in game of the year.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Story, its good   Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:40 pm

look it up Wink
its called Mass Effect: Revelation.

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