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PostSubject: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Sat Dec 01, 2007 1:29 pm

NEW UPDATE: I'm publishing this to sell around campus, I require Cover and Backside Cover ideas, PLEASE give me all your ideas

Halo: The Sangheili-San 全hyuum War
By: R y k n o w 6 9

Prologue- Explanation
The beginning of the war, the basic details Location: Sangheliu System,
The aliens came above the city, with a massive ship all the priests recognized was Forerunner technology. They came down to talk peace just to get the Sangheili痴 holy relics. They claimed to be the Forerunners followers, just like the Sangheili, and that they required them to hand the relics over. The Sangheili refused claiming,
"You destroy them, dismantle them, and make abominations of the relics!" The alien species, now known as the San 全hyuum, defending themselves explained,
"They would of wanted us to do it, to further exploration of their transcendence." After the San 全hyuum leader left, the Sangheili ordered their massive fleet to demolish the San 全hyuum痴 pristine Dreadnought. After the failed attempt to destroy the Dreadnought,the San 全hyuum retaliated and destroyed the Sangheili fleet, ship after ship. The Sangheili people complained that extinction was immanent and surrender or adoption of the San 全hyuum ways of relic dismantlement and reuse was the only way to survive. They chose the adoption, making fleets of newly armed ships, the Sangheilians unleashed hell. The Sangheili in charge of the fleet was Rtas Hyu. This soldier effectively decimated the smaller escorts of the major Forerunner ship. The Sangheili were so close to victory when the enemy decided to make an offering to the Sangheili leaders; become their protectors, with being a sub-servant to the new found brotherhood, The Covenant, and they would share the Forerunner relics. The Sangheili had only one condition, they strip the Dreadnought of all weapons known. The San 全hyuum were hesitant to this proposal, but knew it was required. The Sangheili agreed to this edited proposal and joined the newly founded covenant.

Chapter 1- Acquaintance
First contact, Sanghelios moon Drill sight\
Suumh, Sanghelios only none atmospheric moon,
"Someone hand me the laser drill, I need it to get through this Ocan rock!" Rtas Hyu screamed to his co-workers. Rtas Hyu was a engineer-miner on one of the four moons of Sanghelios, he was married and had two children.
"Here you go Rtas, but be careful, one tear in your suit, your dead." Juhgh Tymany warned Rtas as he handed him the drill. The mass sound of grinding, crumbling rock and heavy mining equipment made it hard to hear his fellow miner. As the drill痴 laser came to life and pinned to the receiver and started to spin, he sung a song he learned long ago, when he met his wife.
"The night goes on, love goes in. May the god痴 bless us, love to all. The night is sweet, with the scent of keet. May we live to server, but to live to freedom." he repeated it till another co-worker, Ras Huydi who was Rtas痴 superior, came over.
"Good job, the Ocan seems to be loosening. Oh, your wife is on Linter Connection, she wants to talk to you, I値l let you." Ras looked pleased.
"Thank you. Juhgh, want to continue my spot, I got a call?" Rtas said, wishing he would, making the job easier when he got back.
Juhgh looked tired "Maybe, if I get mine half done, who痴 calling?"
"Hylie, and thanks if you do." Rtas walked to the Linter antenna receiver, and connected it to his helmet and turned his outer speaker off, to make the conversation private.
"Hylie, how you doing, how痴 Kyu and Vudime?" He said sounding friendly. He used their second name and knew they were fine but he wanted to sound responsible and caring.
It took her a few seconds to respond "They池e fine, I called to see what was coming to the moon." Hylie was a slipstream traffic watcher.
"What do you mean? A ship?" Rtas turned on his COM to call over Tyruik, the ship scheduler. "Are we expecting a ship, or do we know of a asteroid inbound?"
Tyruik look confused, "No, no ship is inbound." his voice was etchy.



Hylie looked at her controls, scanning the scanners for any ships or space objects. She spotted a object, in slipstream heading toward Suumh. She checked for its IFF and ID but had none. She decided to call Rtas, to warn him of a possible asteroid, as this was too big for a meteor.
"Hello, may I get connection to Suumh mining corporation, this is urgent." Hylie sounded calm and sweet.
"Yes Mam. Please hold on." Hylie waited patiently till she got a hold of Ras Huydi.
"Hello, may I speak to Rtas, this is H..." just then, Ras had left the receiver knowing it was her and screaming for Rtas.
"Yes, there痴 a possible asteroid inbound, I have requested a ship to destroy it." Hylie looked at the scanners and saw it was out a slipspace. "Hun, you should be seeing it right about now." Using detailed scans, she realized it was no asteroid, but a ship.

Chapter 2- First Contact
Suumh, Sanghelios moon\\Drill mine Dyir Rine, Site NS,
Rtas looked up and saw the massive object, all of a sudden it got quiet, no drilling, no machinery, just silence. "Hylie, what is it? Rtas had fear crawling on his spine, with the idea of aliens was the answer.
"It痴 a ship, and the priest in the Space Monitor say," she was scared but excited at the same time, "He says it痴 Forerunner, and there痴 more than one ship, but these smaller ones aren稚 Forerunner." Rtas knew if they weren稚 Forerunner, that wasn稚 a Forerunner controlled ship.
"Try to send a small fleet, and try to see who or what they are why they池e here." Rtas was so scared he was afraid to move and might set off something bad.
"I値l be as polite as I can." Hylie tried adding humor to the monumental event, alien contact. Rtas finally decided to move. He went over to Ras, with a worried look.
"What if they are hostile? What will we do!?" One co-worker complained, this was going to turn very sweet, or horribly sour. Rtas had hoped to see aliens in his life time, hoped they壇 be friends, but if these aliens were hostile, he would most likely be drafted, something he didn稚 want. Rtas broke out in the middle,
"I requested Hylie to send a fleet, they池e going to see if they are friendly or hostile!" Rtas had hard time talking over the complaints of his co-workers, they got so loud, Ras couldn稚 take it.
"SHUT THE F*** UP! We will find out!" Just as he said that the fleet Hylie requested flew over head. They were small, but fast and deadly ships. Rtas knew if the enemy was hostile, they would be outnumbered and out skilled. Rtas along with the rest of his co-workers got the fleets radio chatter.
"This is Fleet Master Erash Otaeam, we ask for a response, please reply," There was a long, deafly pause in the COM, Rtas hoped they would respond with a open COM and not guns.
"Hinsu gyus bin sa." The alien tongue was bitter and ununderstandable. He looked up to see the fleet was in a V Flanking Position, with the ships in the back charging their lasers .
"Do you come in peace, if so, please, let us meet on the moon below." The Fleet Master was weary and was being safe by no asking them to come aboard. "We mean no harm." Rtas knew that was a half-lie, the back ships major batteries were charged and aimed at the Forerunner ship.
"Agreed, we are the San 全hyuums, we mean no harm, unless those ships poor laser turrets don稚 disengage." Rtas was astonished, the aliens quickly and almost instantly learned Sangheilian language. He wondered what else they could of done it a short while, he scared him.
"We will meet here, at this mining facility. Please bring whatever you want, we will do same." Rtas looked around and already half the workers were packing up preparing to leave hastily out of what could be a massacre. Some wanted to stay, and clean up the site for their new guests. Rtas decided to stay, he wanted to meet these, San 全hyuum.
Erash Otaeam was worried, they claiming our second best type lasers were poor, they must have advanced Forerunner weapons. He looked to his Communications Officer, a short, young male by the name of Nwtis Fuagha.
"Tell our rear ships to disable the lasers, we don稚 want to start a war." Nwtis nodded and opened a fleetwide channel,
"All rear ships stand down, stay aware though." Erash was slightly enraged by Nwtis痴 add-on. He then commanded Nwtis to call for a Tyros Dropship to take him to the moon. After landing he looked around and saw workers leaving, others cleaning. He went to their leader, a middle-aged man named Ras Huydi.
"Who ever is staying will have to move 3 Cics (miles/kilometers) out to keep things formal." Ras was compliant, telling all workers to go to Site NT which was actually only 2 Cics away. Ras of all people wanted to see the San 全hyuum and what they looked like. As if they heard Erash, after the workers left they came down, not in a dropship, but with one of the main ships escort it was massive. Erash opened a come to his flagship,
"Bring 3 ships down and have them face this one ship face to face." Erash wanted to make sure they had any upper hand hecould get, he might need it. The alien ship stopped with its center circle over them. All of a sudden it glowed, Erash痴 first thought was it was a powerful belly cannon but just then purple light flashed around them and something was coming down, it was a gravity lift. Amazing, he thought, they have gravity lifts when we just learned to use it as propulsion. The beings wore no protective suits for air, had longish heads like him, but had long necks with them. Two sat in levitating chairs, one of metal, another stone, and five others had guns and another two had spears, they were ready for a fight if one started.
"How do you breathe without suits?" Erash痴 2nd in command asked.
"The gravity lift transports air down with it, you may remove your helmets." said the one in the metal chair, "We are here for a search."
"We followed a relics mapping to this system, then we found you. Your world contains holy relics we search and explore, we wish to gather them." The stone chaired one explained, they seemed only here for our relics.
"The Forerunner relics you seek are ours, they aren稚 for sale or trade." Erash didn稚 want to say something he couldn稚 stand behind, but he knew the world would stand behind his statement. "We have them on display for our prayers. You may see them when we establish atrying to find the right wordfriendship."
"We understand, but may we see them in our labs, we will return everyone we dismantle." the first one spoke, Erash was horrified, they dismantled Forerunner relics, heresy.
"Never, you will not dismantle our relics you heretics, find another planet to sin on!" Erash was hasty, and knew he might be making a mistake. If the heretics took the insult deep, they would be at war.
"We understand your accusation. You do not follow the forerunners to their transcendence by taking relics apart." he pressed a button on his chair, "But we insist you hand your relics over, now."


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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Sun Dec 02, 2007 8:54 pm

It looks as if it has potential to be good. This one was good so a series may very well follow suit.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:49 pm

by "series" u mean........ and ty, i got chaoter 2 finished and i updated the chapter names, 2nd i will be making 9-16 chapters (including beginning unchapter and end unchapter)
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Tue Dec 04, 2007 10:11 pm

after continuas harasment, i decided to publish some copies to sell around campus. Any one got ideas for a cover?

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i got a definet name on chapters 1-5, 6-9 are determined on how many chapters from 10-16 i add on.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Tue Dec 04, 2007 10:22 pm

Um well im not a good artist so it would be best to ask another person for help on a cover.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:46 pm

>_> i suck at artistic skillings
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:24 pm

umm guys the previous stories were locked for a reason.. so we dont have these dicsussions this is supposed to be for the writing only...
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:36 am

but posting brings it back to the top of the list Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:08 pm

it should be locked liek the others... but i just got tired of it lol... i will probably unlock the others. but no more posting here except for writing...
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Fri Dec 14, 2007 5:46 pm

Connects to post "1"
Chapter 3- Trade of Voices
Huee, Sanghelios main continent\
Hellios, Captiol City of Huee,

All the Delegates of High Honor(DoHH) met at Hellios, the Capitol of the continent, Huee. They were there to discuss matters of the alien contact on Suumh, to find out if they have anything in common and anything to trade. Unfortunately, one thing they asked to...trade for, was something all Sangheilians held dear as their religion, Forerunner relics. Delegate Jimra Insution, the second highest delegate, was in charge of outside political matters, meaning rural or outside cities, and unfortunately, he somehow got stuck with the beginning speech and the negotiations with the San 全hyuum. Jimra knew they would never trade the relics for any advanced technology. He leaned forward in his chair as he was about to address the people as the ship, now identified by the aliens as th Dreadnought, was in bound for the first negotiations with the new alien people.
"People of Sanghelios, I am here to negotiate with the aliens, the San 全hyuum. The bring with them to our pristine, holy city of Hellios, a Forerunner ship!" He needed to get the people to inspire that the aliens might be like them, in religious means. "They have been searching for the Forerunner relics of the universe for somewhile, and found it." just then one Helio, the guardians of all high order, came over and informed Jimra that the vassal was only 30 cics away and will be showing through the clouds soon.
"People, be amazed, look behind you to see the wonderful art of the Forerunners!" After saying, everyone turned just in time to see the ship starting to cut the clouds, there was a glorious silence as everyone prepared to see the massive ship. Cics later the ship was fully out, its massive gold-chrome metal shined as Yui, Sangheliu System痴 sun, blazed on it. Entranced by its majesty, Jimra was dumb-strucken at the sight of this massive ship. There were gasps and ahhs throughout the crowd, the people of Sanghelios have never seen such pristine Forerunner technology, even a vehicle for that matter. He then noticed 4 small ships coming, he was gitty and happy, but also scared, if they wanted their relics, they have the force to take them. One ship came to a stop over Jimra, the other three circled. Down came three aliens, each in a metal chair, and each with a large mantle on their head.
"Welcome, welcome to Sanghelios! We are happy to see we aren稚 the only people of the Forerunner cause." Trying to sound outgoing and sincere, he continued, "We understand, you wish to trade for some relics?" One of the aliens, the one with the biggest mantle, looked at him and nodded 創o.
"Not exactly that, I said we are following their transcendence and require your relics. We would be happy to trade if it means we can skip a plausible war that値l lead to your extinction." The alien was harsh and only got to the point. Words like"War?" and "Thieves!" came out from the crowd, people were outraged and demanded action from Jimra. He was scared of what the aliens potential of persuasion could be.
"War, why do you insist on starting a war for something talk can easily settle. The artifacts are ours, but we can indeed work something out instead of making a complete disaster." Just then a Helio jumped in front of Jimra, a beam blew its head apart and splattered all over him. The other Helio shouted in anger as he threw Jimra to the ground,
"SNIPER! All forces get down here!"
Chapter 4- Rise to War, Fall of Peace
Middle of Huee, Sanghelios main continent\
Outskirts of Hellios, Captiol City,

Erash joined his troops in the dropship down to the delegates meeting after one of the Lights Helios alerted a sniper. Erash didn稚 trust the aliens and this point beam sniper rifle shot was not Sangheilian technology. Peace was a second thought in this negotiation, war was the first. Before landing, Erash informed the troops.
"These creatures are assumed to an assassination of Delegate Jimra Insution, second highest of DoHH. He was in the middle of negotiations about the trade of our religious artifacts of the Forerunners when one Helio spotted a sniper and gave his life away. That sniper, and possibly more enemies are a serious threat. The other delegates and civilians have been evacuated from the area, so keep weapons free. May the Forerunners be with you brothers." He said as the dropship stopped,
"And to you too sir!" All the others said in unison. The doors dropped and they all took cover.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo: The Sangheili-San 'Shyuum War   Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:31 pm

wow, this topic, THIS ENTIRE forum section is dead, =( the other forums care about this sections
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